OK, first did you follow the instructions, install the game, and then download and install the file I told you to download
Alright, first thing you want to do is get an older version of Games For Windows Live (LIVE 18.104.22.168)
here Freeware Files.com - Download
Anyway if you don't have the redistributable files installed, skip that part and just install the downloaded version I mentioned and go from there.
BTW do you have "Microsoft Games for Windows Marketplace
" installed? If not, you might have to download and install that before
doing anything in my instructions. Get it here: Download the Games for Windows Client | PC Games Client - Xbox.com
BTW if the the game isn't legit/pirated (i'm just saying) there's going to be issues.