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Can someone critique my letter?
Hi guys! XD I'm writing a letter to our dean because of matters you'll find out when you read the letter. While I was told that the dean is not known to turn down these kinds of requests, ever, I just want to be sure. Are there any mistakes here that I should brush out? Lots of thanks!
Dear Sir,
I am writing you about a conflict with my studies and orders (attached) that were given to me by the U.S. Army, and that I am requesting to be administratively dropped from my courses.
I was recently informed that I am to go to school in Fort Stewart, Georgia this coming April # where I am scheduled to be in training until at least May # which, by that time, school should have already ended.
With the advice of one of my professors, and because of the burden this would cost me, I have concluded that an Incomplete (I) would be too much for me due to the time I would have lost in between my studies and that I should opt for a withdrawal. However, a normal withdrawal might have undesired repercussions brought to me and my financial aid because of matters beyond my control.
I am hoping and I thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,