I need a bit of help with an essay I wrote. I have this due tomorrow, I began on it yesterday. It may be a bit sloppy so far I had 1 person looked at it.
Please help me with my thesis, and conclusion i need a lot of help.
I didn't restrict the editing, however PLEASE use comments to add any info.
My latest copy is draft 2.
Please use "Personal...(comments by Draz)" as en axample on how to do it.